Сообщение Re[3]: Безопасный код без GC - вы готовы? от 18.10.2014 7:36
Изменено 18.10.2014 7:37 Don Reba
Здравствуйте, -n1l-, Вы писали:
N>Здравствуйте, Don Reba, Вы писали:
DR>>В кои-то веки рад переводу, ибо оригинал ужасающе неграмотен.
N>Примеры неграмотности можно?
> FizzBuzz is intended as a simple task, but in Rust there are a few pitfalls for the novice to be aware of.
Style. "Pitfals, of which the user should be aware."
> These aren’t problems with Rust but rather differences from what people are commonly familiar with, restrictions that may seem arduous at first but ultimately give you more power, at a small cost.
"From that, with which people are commonly familiar."
Unnecessary comma before "at a small cost."
Switch from third person to first person.
> The version of Rust latest confirmed to work for this post is Rust 0.12.
"The latest version of Rust."
> If anything has broken with it, please contact me.
"If anything is broken with it" or "if anything has become broken since then."
> You might write it like this which follows, for example, a way that works fine.
Missed comma before "which." Run-on sentence. Terrible phrasing.
"You might write it like the following example, which works fine."
etc…
N>Здравствуйте, Don Reba, Вы писали:
DR>>В кои-то веки рад переводу, ибо оригинал ужасающе неграмотен.
N>Примеры неграмотности можно?
> FizzBuzz is intended as a simple task, but in Rust there are a few pitfalls for the novice to be aware of.
Style. "Pitfals, of which the user should be aware."
> These aren’t problems with Rust but rather differences from what people are commonly familiar with, restrictions that may seem arduous at first but ultimately give you more power, at a small cost.
"From that, with which people are commonly familiar."
Unnecessary comma before "at a small cost."
Switch from third person to first person.
> The version of Rust latest confirmed to work for this post is Rust 0.12.
"The latest version of Rust."
> If anything has broken with it, please contact me.
"If anything is broken with it" or "if anything has become broken since then."
> You might write it like this which follows, for example, a way that works fine.
Missed comma before "which." Run-on sentence. Terrible phrasing.
"You might write it like the following example, which works fine."
etc…
Здравствуйте, -n1l-, Вы писали:
N>Здравствуйте, Don Reba, Вы писали:
DR>>В кои-то веки рад переводу, ибо оригинал ужасающе неграмотен.
N>Примеры неграмотности можно?
> FizzBuzz is intended as a simple task, but in Rust there are a few pitfalls for the novice to be aware of.
Style. "Pitfalls, of which the user should be aware."
> These aren’t problems with Rust but rather differences from what people are commonly familiar with, restrictions that may seem arduous at first but ultimately give you more power, at a small cost.
"From that, with which people are commonly familiar."
Unnecessary comma before "at a small cost."
Switch from third person to first person.
> The version of Rust latest confirmed to work for this post is Rust 0.12.
"The latest version of Rust."
> If anything has broken with it, please contact me.
"If anything is broken with it" or "if anything has become broken since then."
> You might write it like this which follows, for example, a way that works fine.
Missed comma before "which." Run-on sentence. Terrible phrasing.
"You might write it like the following example, which works fine."
etc…
N>Здравствуйте, Don Reba, Вы писали:
DR>>В кои-то веки рад переводу, ибо оригинал ужасающе неграмотен.
N>Примеры неграмотности можно?
> FizzBuzz is intended as a simple task, but in Rust there are a few pitfalls for the novice to be aware of.
Style. "Pitfalls, of which the user should be aware."
> These aren’t problems with Rust but rather differences from what people are commonly familiar with, restrictions that may seem arduous at first but ultimately give you more power, at a small cost.
"From that, with which people are commonly familiar."
Unnecessary comma before "at a small cost."
Switch from third person to first person.
> The version of Rust latest confirmed to work for this post is Rust 0.12.
"The latest version of Rust."
> If anything has broken with it, please contact me.
"If anything is broken with it" or "if anything has become broken since then."
> You might write it like this which follows, for example, a way that works fine.
Missed comma before "which." Run-on sentence. Terrible phrasing.
"You might write it like the following example, which works fine."
etc…