Re[3]: Безопасный код без GC - вы готовы?
От: Don Reba Канада https://stackoverflow.com/users/49329/don-reba
Дата: 18.10.14 07:36
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Здравствуйте, -n1l-, Вы писали:

N>Здравствуйте, Don Reba, Вы писали:


DR>>В кои-то веки рад переводу, ибо оригинал ужасающе неграмотен.


N>Примеры неграмотности можно?



http://chrismorgan.info/blog/rust-fizzbuzz.html

> FizzBuzz is intended as a simple task, but in Rust there are a few pitfalls for the novice to be aware of.


Style. "Pitfalls, of which the user should be aware."

> These aren’t problems with Rust but rather differences from what people are commonly familiar with, restrictions that may seem arduous at first but ultimately give you more power, at a small cost.


"From that, with which people are commonly familiar."

Unnecessary comma before "at a small cost."

Switch from third person to first person.

> The version of Rust latest confirmed to work for this post is Rust 0.12.


"The latest version of Rust."

> If anything has broken with it, please contact me.


"If anything is broken with it" or "if anything has become broken since then."

> You might write it like this which follows, for example, a way that works fine.


Missed comma before "which." Run-on sentence. Terrible phrasing.

"You might write it like the following example, which works fine."

etc…
Ce n'est que pour vous dire ce que je vous dis.
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