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Dear John,

After having a talk with Michael Doom I’m really happy to see that you are hiring.
Michael advised me to have a talk with you about Software Engineering position in Finance Department.
I have exceptional C++ development skills, knowledge of functional programming and good quantitative skills.
When you review the attached resume, you will notice that I have good software engineering expirience and domain knowledges.
Also in the evenings I study finance at Some American University.
On weekends I pursue Chartered Financial Analyst (CFA). Course description: https://www.cfainstitute.org/pages/index.aspx

May we meet and discuss more details about this opportunity?

Thanks.
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